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Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Cooking with a Recipe...i.e. I’m a Plotter!

In college, my dinners were pasta or sandwiches. Dessert was microwaved s’mores. When I got married, I actually had to cook. You know, with real meat and raw vegetables and spices. I had to read recipes and buy the ingredients and somehow make it look like the cookbook picture. Luckily, I come from a tradition of great cooks, so I had skill in this domestic area!
Eventually I felt confident in my cooking and didn’t look over the recipes for meals I cooked regularly. In theory, this made sense to me. I’d made certain meals more than three times and had it completely memorized, right? Well...I really should’ve glanced at the recipes!
A chicken pot pie turned out thin and soupy when I forgot to drain the can of Veg-All. Once I cooked an easy steak much too long. Another time I forgot to moisten stuffing for a crock pot meal. It had rock-star rock-hard status. 
These weren’t disastrous meals, but they weren’t good either (my husband still ate all of them- bless him!). Now I know I need to look over recipes even if I’ve made the meal dozens of times before. I must make absolutely sure I’ve got all the ingredients and the correct cooking time and temperature or else no one will request another bite.
Just like I need a recipe for cooking, I need an outline for writing. I’m definitely a plotter. I wish I had the freedom of a pantser! But those times I’ve tried writing “by the seat of my pants” I ran into problems. Nothing disastrous, but definitely nothing juicy came out of it.
I don’t outline like the way school taught me. I don’t use Roman numerals or topics and subtopics (who has time for that stringent process?). I have a couple unfinished novels and one finished novel (thanks to NaNoWriMo ’09!). Before I started writing, I wrote a summary for each day in my novel touching on major plot points. I wrote character descriptions for every character no matter how minor, and I wrote down the major conflicts and resolutions. I also knew at least part of my ending. I outline very simply. It looks mostly like paragraphs with bulleted points. (For short stories, I do the same thing but it’s on a much smaller scale.)
I just need a plan to follow, all my ideas written down. Do I follow my outline perfectly? No! My outline changes throughout my writing process. When I cook, I read the entire recipe before starting and then I alter it however I want. I’ll fry the meat instead of baking it or I’ll skip black olives and add an onion. I do the same thing in my stories. A background character turns into a major player. Conflicts turn into something else entirely. But I need my outline there for when I run into problems. Then I turn to it and remember, “Oh, yea, this character meets this person who acts like this and makes this happens which turns into this and….” You get the idea. 
Outlines keep me from burning scrumptious ideas!
“The benefit of this kind of outlining is that you discover a story's flaws before you invest a lot of time writing the first draft, and it's almost impossible to get stuck at a difficult chapter, because you've already done the work to push through those kinds of blocks.” ~George Stephen

“Planning to write is not writing. Outlining, researching, talking to people about what you're doing, none of that is writing. Writing is writing.” ~E.L. Doctorow

Share with me!
Are you a plotter or a pantser? If a plotter, how do you outline? If a pantser, do you write any notes or just keep it all in your head as you type your story?

11 comments:

Alyson said...

I'm a plotter! I start with the scenes I definitely know will happen and it just snowballs from there. It's a pretty loose process, but it keeps the story organized.

I was the queen of microwaving s'mores in college! So yummy.

Jayne said...

I am definitely a plotter to start with, although as the novel progresses I turn into a bit of a pantser. My outline will be the basic plot idea (overall big picture) and then a chapter by chapter break-down (perhaps just a paragraph) of what should happen, and what sort of research I will need to do. After that the pantser in me takes over, and the characters start talking, and sometimes I will think hm, need something new there! But mostly like you I keep glancing at the original plot to keep me on track. Most of the pantser stuff has happened with the redrafting - the first draft was pretty much my outline to the letter. Love your recipe analogy! :)

B. Miller said...

I am definitely a pantser, but I usually have the next few chapters mapped out in my head before I write. I've tried outlines, but they just don't seem to work for me.

Great post!

Talli Roland said...

Plotter - to some degree. I plot the turning points and climax for my protagonist and subplots. I also need to know why my characters are behaving the way they are, and what they're trying to achieve. I tried being a pantster but it just didn't work for me!

Rebecca @ Diary of a Virgin Novelist said...

Great analogy to cooking...will you come over to my house and make dinner?

I think I am in the middle - a pantster and a plotter. My outline is probably only about a page or two and then the rest comes from out of thin air.

Jon said...

I am too lazy to be a plotter. I am a pantser. I start with a great first sentence and an idea, and watch the story grow into its own. This works well for me with writing short stories. But I'm sure if I were ever "eager" enough to write a novel, I'd have to do some plotting...

Saumya said...

I plotter like a mad woman. That is so cute of you to correlate the way you cook with the way you write. I'm not married yet, so still surviving on packets of noodles and sandwiches!

Laura Marcella said...

Alyson- My outlines are loose, too! I just need something to keep me from getting stuck. I love s'mores! Of course they're better over a fire, but microwaving them works, too. :)

Jayne- Sometimes pantsing does take over when I get really involved in my story. But always I need to refer back to my outline.

B.Miller- Usually I love outlining- getting all my ideas on paper and seeing how it'll go- but sometimes I do wish I could just write without it!

Talli- I tried it, too, but then I got easily frustrated. An outline helps keep me from giving up!

Rebecca- Sure, what's your favorite meal? Haha! You're a planster! Or something like that, lol.

Jon- Why does that not surprise me? Haha! You know what novel I'm "eager" for you to write! If you need any plotting tips just holler.

Saumya- Enjoy the noodles and sandwiches! Sometimes I sure do miss those easy five minute dinners, lol.

Elizabeth Spann Craig/Riley Adams said...

I just do little mini-outlines....what do I want to accomplish with the next chapter, or even just the next page or scene. I don't outline very far ahead. :)

Elizabeth
Mystery Writing is Murder

Bluestocking said...

I loosely plot... I know where I am going in the overall story arc. I may know snippets of dialogue or key plot points I want to hit in a scene, but that's it. I let the rest come to me as I write, and often I surprise myself at how things come together thanks to my subconscious that somehow manages to keep everything working without my knowledge.

Laura Marcella said...

Elizabeth- Your outlining is even simpler than mine! I'll have to try your way and see how it goes. :)

Bluestocking- You're another plontser! It's always good to have some idea where you're going, then just let your subconscious somehow bring it all together.